Saturday 28 July 2012

Children and The Snow

Do you know what is "Shape Poem"? Well, today Miss Sheba teaches us on how to shape a poem. She begins the lecture with many of the poems that are done by our seniors. This actually gives us so many ideas on what is this topic about.

We are allowed to work in pair or alone. So, I actually work in pair with Pui San (Keryn Kok). At the beginning, it is really difficult for both of us to shape our poem. After discussion, we have come into a conclusion. As the title shows, we choose to write "Children and The Snow". We spend time to make our sentences so that every sentence got the same rhythm and this is really challenging for us.

Have a look on out first try shape poem.




Children are looking out of the window
The town is covered with snow
Children want to play with the snow
The mother's heads nod
Excitement in children showed
Children are standing in a row
And preparing a battle of snow

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